Dawning Creations

Going Up

December 11, 2019

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Up and up, one leg in front of another.
Half running, half staggering.
Up and up, until the highest point is touched.

Daring and daffy on this hot day, feigning bravery, feigning strength.
It was only when we surfaced, bobbing high above the cliffside, we realized we weren’t pretending.

We were all we wanted and so much more.

6 responses to “Going Up”

Brothers Campfire

December 11, 2019 at 3:19 pm

Very Nice!

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1. BrittnyLee
  
  December 11, 2019 at 7:11 pm
  
  Thank you so much for commenting 🙂 I’m glad you liked it! I hope you’re having a great week !
  
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  1. Brothers Campfire
    
    December 12, 2019 at 2:22 am
    
    Thank you! You as well!
    
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  2. BrittnyLee
    
    December 13, 2019 at 7:20 pm
    
    You’re welcome!
    
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Woodsy

December 22, 2019 at 9:32 am

Beautiful. Poignant.

Going up like a pair of eyes that see your own private galaxy where some around you might see the most forgotten piece of sky… the floating eyes, aching to pull us free.

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1. BrittnyLee
  
  December 22, 2019 at 9:42 pm
  
  Wow I really like your take . Holy smokes! Forgotten piece of sky is a beautiful line. Floating eyes, aching to pull us free. Beautiful! 🙂 Thank you for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it, friend . Keep inspiring !
  
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