Go – Dawning Creations

Static, surreal air,
open eyes,
black skies,

There’s too much to bare.

Boredom trumps the excited sun,
in daylight, fingers drum

I’m hungry for
I’m needing
You

Don’t tell me to go.

Green lights,
Ready
Push the pedal to the floor.

Do anything.
Anything.

Just don’t tell me to go.

About the poem: I was out walking on a nature trail and saw this rock someone had made. This has been ongoing around the neighborhood. It’s a caring act to create and share with others. This definitely brought a smile to my face.

8 responses to “Go”

Woodsy

August 19, 2020 at 12:22 am

We have them here too.
Unfortunately,
stones won’t do it for me right now.
But raw slices of a massive heart, told so gently…
that’s another matter.

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1. BrittnyLee
  
  August 19, 2020 at 1:09 pm
  
  Beautiful comment 🙂 awe bro!!!! Thank you !
  
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The Eclectic Contrarian

September 5, 2020 at 2:31 pm

Sounds tingly and a bit frisky lol!!

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1. BrittnyLee
  
  September 6, 2020 at 1:08 am
  
  It was a very random free verse piece. I’m not even sure where words form in my mind sometimes. It’s almost like someone else takes hold of my mind and hand writing for me. I challenge myself and purposefully write from other perspectives often but this was not the case for this piece. Haha random as all holy heck.
  
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  1. The Eclectic Contrarian
    
    September 6, 2020 at 1:27 am
    
    I think it’s BrittnyLee coming out. She doesn’t even know it’s her! 😁
    
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  2. BrittnyLee
    
    September 6, 2020 at 11:44 am
    
    Haha could be . 🙂 hows your week ? How are you??
    
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  3. The Eclectic Contrarian
    
    September 6, 2020 at 9:24 pm
    
    It’s been good! I’ve made it to Sunday 🙌
    
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  4. BrittnyLee
    
    September 7, 2020 at 1:34 pm
    
    That’s good!!
    
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