Askance with your slitted eyes, slick with faked tears.
You’re grinning.
Your mouth stretching but never reaching your eyes.
You’re not the human you were.
I don’t know you.

Askance.
You’re viewing life through a myopic lens.

Human, you were.

Once.

Collecting suspicions and misguided evidence.
You’re searching in dark rooms for a source of sunlight.

Inconspicuous.
Unbalanced and clumsy
You’re slipping on the tight rope of your own fastening.
You’re hitting hard ground.

We could play with words until you become what you lie.
It’s too late.

This is coming to a close.
I miss the soul you held before your lens got foggy.

Askance.

9 responses to “Askance”

  1. Jonathan Caswell Avatar
    Jonathan Caswell

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    THIS WELL-WRITTEN POEM SEEMS CURIOUSLY TIMELY…!

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Thank you so much Jonathan πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€

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      1. Jonathan Caswell Avatar
        Jonathan Caswell

        YOU HAVE GOOD STUFF—AS ALWAYS! πŸ˜€

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      2. BrittnyLee Avatar
        BrittnyLee

        Thank you aww πŸ˜ΆπŸ™ƒπŸ€—

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      3. Jonathan Caswell Avatar
        Jonathan Caswell

        πŸ˜€ Calling it as I see it! πŸ˜€

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      4. BrittnyLee Avatar
        BrittnyLee

        I really appreciate that Jonathan πŸ™‚ god bless my friend! I hope you’re having a great weekend

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        Jonathan Caswell

        SURE TRYING…!

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  2. Jaya Avendel Avatar
    Jaya Avendel

    I read this poem once. I looked up askance and read it again, and was amazed at how much that little word changed my whole experience of this piece! Thanks so much for sharing.

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Thank you so much πŸ€— . This is going to sound really nerdy but askance was one of the new words I discovered in one of word games I play. I looked up the meaning and fell in love with the word. I started writing and this was the result . πŸ™‚ I’m so touched that you enjoyed it and value it for what it is. πŸ™‚ thank you so much !!!!!

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