I smell the raw, earthly scent of this lake
smell the brine
smell the salt flake off of the fish
smell the cottony fallen feathers
fallen frivolously off the fowl

I feel a sense of home
a sense of being sane
Haven’t felt sane or the same
Haven’t felt
Sane

A tickle with each breeze
Hair not irritating my cheeks
It’s gentle like a lover’s caress.

The twilight sky readying me for the night.
Sky paints color on a black canvas
Off white stars speckle the backdrop

All is quiet
If only I could ignore
the fools galavanting on the pier

It’s silent as they dissolve
into the horizon
The end of the pier is immediate
Behind me, an evanescence with the fools and fowl.

I’m one with the dramatic horizon.
He is dotting his last bit
the part of sky becoming orange and pink

I’m caught up
feeling modestly voyeuristic
Pink splattering my face
matching the hot pinks above me

I’ve been distracted
like so many times before


Amazed at last

I’m caught up
in this heavy sensation
I’m becoming as elusive as this sun setting.

13 responses to “Horizon”

  1. eunice Avatar
    eunice

    I also smell the breeze of the horizon in this post.😊😊

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      It’s a great bunch of smells πŸ™‚ thank you so much for commenting Eunice πŸ™‚ I hope you are having a great Wednesday. I just got back from Erie on Monday. I’m so sad to leave. Do you ever get sad when having to leave your vacation break ? I always do for some reason. I love my home and my home state. It’s strange. Haha

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      1. eunice Avatar
        eunice

        Yes, l sometimes do feel a little sad too, when leaving, but it’s part of the game.

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      2. BrittnyLee Avatar
        BrittnyLee

        I’m glad I’m not the only one!!! Yes it is 😊

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  2. Bamiseojo Avatar
    Bamiseojo

    I love this poem.
    It makes me remember the scenes of loved nature’s I have experience.

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      BrittnyLee

      Thank you! I enjoy hearing how poetry impacts readers 😊. Nature really is the most beautiful gift from God. I’m feel so at peace with nature, especially on trips. I love exploring new places. Thank you so much for commenting and stopping by πŸ˜€ Bamiseojo

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  3. Woodsy Avatar
    Woodsy

    Gorgeous.
    Just so beautifully,
    almost mysteriously told.

    I could swim in this, sis.

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Thanks, bro!!! Lake Erie really inspired me. It was so tranquil. It’s like how I imagine you felt in Wale those photos were incredible πŸ˜€. I’m trying to keep exploring and keep my creativity running ha. I miss writing. I want to start consistently posting twice a week again. I’m trying to get into the habit again while on holiday break.

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    PRAPTI GUPTA

    I was flowing with your words… Just loved it❀

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Thank you πŸ’—β˜ΊοΈ I read hoping this piece would take my readers to another space πŸ™‚ thank you !!!!

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    Jonathan Caswell

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford.

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Thank you Jonathan ! πŸ™‚

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    thereluctantpoet

    Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.

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