Dawning Creations

Dissing the Greens

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BrittnyLee

Colors flame, dissing the aging greens
Crows caw, oblivious to the geese fleeing
Standing on the edge of a lake
I feel my heartbeat settle

Colors flame, teaming up with a cool wind
Clouds promise rain
The damp, earthy scent growing less faint

My eyelids flutter shut

I’m somewhere I want to be

6 responses to “Dissing the Greens”

  1. LaDonna Remy Avatar
    LaDonna Remy

    Beautiful “I’m somewhere I want to be”. Such a beautiful, cleat, and important statement. 💓

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Thank you so much 🥰:) I’m really happy you enjoyed this and stopped by !

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  2. Journalofthegrey Avatar
    Journalofthegrey

    Right there with ya!

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Right ?!, I love fall 🙂

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  3. Woodsy Avatar
    Woodsy

    I still ache for somewhere I want to be…
    for somewhere I can weave deep into all those frightened places orbiting my heart.

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Frightened places
      gracefully enter
      Transfixing my eyes
      Averting their hunger
      They shift their direction

      Dauntless I aim
      A revolver in my heart
      Saving the last of this chase

      I weave a web to retreat
      Strong enough
      it calls

      I ache to set these starving souls free

      Somewhere I want to be
      is somewhere that won’t change a thing

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