Trees still grow
Flaming crimsons and candy apple greens

On a street where she loved
and lived and sang with the stars

Her dream consumed her
A temptress all in white

Blush red among alabaster cheeks
becoming love tumbling down hills with her dream
Heart beating vital blood
Tendons stretching and breaths coming out in rasps
She reached her goal

Taut muscles balled as she massaged the cream into her skin
Torrents of pain shot her down
Her neck, her knees, her thighs, her back
She choked back a sob
when the doctors told her why.

Her smile only so deep
She fancied dancing with sycamore trees
Climbing the great pines
and looking out into the valleys

As her pain waxed,
She was found weeping with the willows

The day her dream departed.
A smile, the blush betraying her frail features

Her love, her passion, it was deep enough to bring her dream back

The day she stopped hiding.

11 responses to “Dear Dreams”

  1. Journalofthegrey Avatar
    Journalofthegrey

    Excellent writing as always!

    You’re really pretty!!!

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Aw thank you so much !

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      1. Journalofthegrey Avatar
        Journalofthegrey

        Honestly, there’s a story in those eyes. In that face is a story. She’s hurt. But perseveres! Pretty but powerful.

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      2. BrittnyLee Avatar
        BrittnyLee

        Thank you so much . You’re too kind haha. I think I’m odd looking like a fox . That’s what I think I look like. I love foxes. 🙂 I don’t exactly think I’m pretty. I don’t mean it to diss myself . I just think I’m different looking haha 😆

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      3. Journalofthegrey Avatar
        Journalofthegrey

        It’s the difference that is so awesome.

        Hopefully I’m not sounding awkward or weird…

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      4. BrittnyLee Avatar
        BrittnyLee

        You don’t ! You sound honest and it’s awesome !

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      5. Journalofthegrey Avatar
        Journalofthegrey

        It’s the thing that whatever comes to mind fires down my fingers. Some people are ok with it and some seem weird.. it plays on my social awkwardness. If I tell you something I’m being very honest. Unless I’m in a silly mood.

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  2. Journalofthegrey Avatar
    Journalofthegrey

    Stay awesome BrittnyLee! You have such a vivid imagination and it comes out so awesomely in your writing!

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Aw thank you !!!!!

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  3. krishna sinha Avatar
    krishna sinha

    Wow aMAZING ONE.

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    1. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Thank you, Krishna so much 🙂

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