Dawning Creations

Sleep Waking

September 7, 2022

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I’m lost in my own eyes,
a grayish blue haze.
Lost in translation,
surrendering to the circumstance of traffic,
bustling beeps and rusty signs

My eyes pulled me down deeper.
Looking glass, frighten me whiter

I can’t see the pupils
in my blue orbs.
Where have I gone?
When did I succumb to this?

This is starting to feel
all too surreal.

Pressing my thumb
to the muddy water,
I think I’ll soon be waking up.

4 responses to “Sleep Waking”

WanderingCanadians

September 9, 2022 at 8:35 am

I love how descriptive your poetry is. I can picture the images and scenes in my head. Thanks for sharing. Linda

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1. BrittnyLee
  
  September 12, 2022 at 12:35 pm
  
  Thank you, Linda 💗 .That’s how I see things when I read your travel blogs . The pictures are just a bonus 😜 . We will keep inspiring each other 🙂 I hope you’re having a good Monday 😊
  
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johncoyote

September 19, 2022 at 12:53 am

I have been sleep walking for many years. I adore the poetry.

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1. BrittnyLee
  
  September 21, 2022 at 3:51 am
  
  Yes, it’s an effortless ability for some of us. I feel like it’s a commonality asking some writers . Thanks so much, John 🙂 . I appreciate your kind words and adore your pieces as well
  
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