Dawning Creations

Jane

April 9, 2025

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Blame Jane,
those feelings
you can’t quite explain,
leading to memories
rain sodden with pain

Blame Jane
who makes me wait.
I could’ve known many years, before
Blame Jane

She took too long,
with rhythmic changes coming on.
Where was Jane,
silently watching,
always tagging along.

I’ll blame Jane
instead of sitting with pain,
instead of accepting,
I am Jane

6 responses to “Jane”

Priti

April 10, 2025 at 6:27 am

Oh 😳 you are Jane. Beautiful poem

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1. BrittnyLee
  
  April 10, 2025 at 11:38 am
  
  Thank you 💕🥰 it’s a twist for sure
  
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2. BrittnyLee
  
  April 10, 2025 at 11:38 am
  
  Thank you !!!
  
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  1. Priti
    
    April 10, 2025 at 3:19 pm
    
    👏
    
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WanderingCanadians

April 12, 2025 at 7:39 pm

Didn’t see that coming in the end how you were Jane. It’s funny how we blame ourselves for so much that’s beyond our control. If only we could be a bit easier on ourselves sometimes.

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1. BrittnyLee
  
  April 12, 2025 at 10:29 pm
  
  Honestly, right ?! I like to add twists to my poems when I can. It changes things up a bit but it definitely is a part of me for sure . I don’t look at it as bad l, though, just a learning experience 🙂 thanks for your thoughts .I always love them. You out so much thought in what you say and it means a lot !
  
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