Dawning Creations

Jane

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BrittnyLee

Blame Jane,
those feelings
you can’t quite explain,
leading to memories
rain sodden with pain

Blame Jane
who makes me wait.
I could’ve known many years, before
Blame Jane

She took too long,
with rhythmic changes coming on.
Where was Jane,
silently watching,
always tagging along.

I’ll blame Jane
instead of sitting with pain,
instead of accepting,
I am Jane

6 responses to “Jane”

  1. Priti Avatar
    Priti

    Oh 😳 you are Jane. Beautiful poem

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      BrittnyLee

      Thank you 💕🥰 it’s a twist for sure

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    2. BrittnyLee Avatar
      BrittnyLee

      Thank you !!!

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        Priti

        👏

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    WanderingCanadians

    Didn’t see that coming in the end how you were Jane. It’s funny how we blame ourselves for so much that’s beyond our control. If only we could be a bit easier on ourselves sometimes.

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      BrittnyLee

      Honestly, right ?! I like to add twists to my poems when I can. It changes things up a bit but it definitely is a part of me for sure . I don’t look at it as bad l, though, just a learning experience 🙂 thanks for your thoughts .I always love them. You out so much thought in what you say and it means a lot !

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